Ok. This is a hard one to review because there was a lot of good but quite a bit of bad as well.
Good- The environments modles and texturing was wonderful the train looked top notch and the entire thing had wonderful detail.
Bad- The characters were too cartoonish they didn't fit with the backgrounds (to fix this I'd suggest a better skin shader). Or vise-versa the backgrounds needed to be simpler they just needed to match in style better.
The animation was well done not perfect but dam good.
The only problem I have with the script is when she causes part of the train to blow up. After this they both get sucked out as if the train is pressurized. So this leads to 2 options 1) the train is so high up there's a lack of oxygen or 2) the train is moving so fast its causing a vacuum. However since both of them seem to be able to leave the train and stand on the roof without a problem this shoots down both those options and leaves me scratching my head.
All in all an Excellent animation and better than I can do as of yet nice job.
tough one to judge
The art at the very begging isn't as good as the rest of the vid but over all its quite well animated however the content went slightly over the tasteful line. By that I don't mean because of the concept of the animation it's self but rather how you chose to show them. (For example on the zoom in on the anus when the worms popped out you could have just shown his strained face and worms come out from under him.) For this I'm thinking you a 6 but I'm giving you one point more for not being afraid to "go there" and the complete originality of the story.
The thing is I don't see whats wrong about showing stuff like that in a cartoon since its only a cartoon :I
Haha nice even got Simons voice in there
You create a world that's gorgeous and characters that are instantly likeable the animation wile not "perfect" is as close to it as most humans can get. Would L-O-V-E to see more! :D
LOVE the style!
Clean solid animation with great style and concept! I wouldn't change a thing but its length. GREAT JOB!
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